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CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

I like how you get the story across.
You say something like "This sight is awesome"
and people doubt the awesomeness,
And then you're like "No seriously, dA made my day!"

However, it is not as deep as these stories can get.
It's basically and short conversation, and not really anything special.

I would like to comment on the humour, before I do, I should note that I'm not that strong in humour.
Okay, I like the feel of it. It makes me feel like we are friends having a conversation, and you just blurt that out. It's not serious, it's humourous. However, it is not funny (to me). I did not laugh out loud.
I have no idea if anyone else did.

For personality, it's loud, and bold, but not really unique. Plenty of people can be loud and bold, and this does not stand out.

Also, the language (word choice), is a bit simple. There is one four syllabic word, and the rest of them are mono syllabic.
It makes it a bit inconsistent, and that kinda takes away from it.

And...
Yeah, that's all I got : P